DEVELOPMENTAL MANUSCRIPT REVIEWS
Developmental Read Option 1
Full Manuscript Review + Feedback Session and Follow-Ups. What works, where to focus, and where to go next.
- Developmental feedback on the manuscript. A general read, not a copy edit. Includes some line notes/corrections.
- Editorial letter of commentary/analysis. What works, where to focus, and where to go next.
- 60 minute consultation to discuss structure, content, flow, character development, theme, etc. + craft and process issues.
- Two 15-minute follow-up calls and/or emails.
Developmental Read Option 2
TWO full Manuscript Reviews, Feedback Sessions, Follow-Ups. What works, where to focus, and where to go next.
- First read = developmental feedback on the manuscript + editorial letter of commentary/analysis.
- 60 minute consultation to discuss structure, content, flow, character development, theme, etc. + craft and process issues.
- Two 15-minute follow-up calls and/or emails for questions.
- Second read = follow-up feedback on the manuscript + editorial letter of commentary/analysis + 60 minute feedback session.
- Includes one additional 15-minute follow-up call and/or email for questions.
- Best value package.
Deep-Dive Brainstorm Packages
- ~4 hour brainstorming session to envision overall book arc and structure, fine tune outline, and design writing deliverables.
- Includes preliminary light read (no written comments) of up to 50 pages
- Discount when added on to Developmental Read options.
Spark the Second Fire: a one-on-one book lab for the published writer…
This is the all-in-one, comprehensive coaching AND editing package…
- Initial developmental edit/analysis.
- 1.5 day private deep-delve consultation/strategy session at my forest studio.
- Review/feedback on up to 20 pages a month.
- 12 scheduled 50-minute process/coaching/support/feedback calls.
- 3 free-floating panic or wild excitement calls.
- Manuscript read/re-read including a full line edit.
- Second full-day deep-delve session in my studio.
- Final manuscript read.
- Editorial letter with optional referral to publication coach/proposal writing coach.
None of these fit exactly? Let me know what you need and we’ll figure it out.