DEVELOPMENTAL MANUSCRIPT REVIEWS

photo credit: Anne Hamersky Photographer

Developmental Read Option 1

Full Manuscript Review + Feedback Session and Follow-Ups. What works, where to focus, and where to go next.

  • Developmental feedback on the manuscript. A general read, not a copy edit. Includes some line notes/corrections.
  • Editorial letter of commentary/analysis. What works, where to focus, and where to go next.
  • 60 minute consultation to discuss structure, content, flow, character development, theme, etc. + craft and process issues.
  • Two 15-minute follow-up calls and/or emails.

 Contact me for pricing.

Developmental Read Option 2 

TWO full Manuscript Reviews, Feedback Sessions, Follow-Ups. What works, where to focus, and where to go next.

  • First read = developmental feedback on the manuscript + editorial letter of commentary/analysis.
  • 60 minute consultation to discuss structure, content, flow, character development, theme, etc. + craft and process issues.
  • Two 15-minute follow-up calls and/or emails for questions.
  • Second read = follow-up feedback on the manuscript + editorial letter of commentary/analysis + 60 minute feedback session.
  • Includes one additional 15-minute follow-up call and/or email for questions.
  • Best value package.

 Contact me for pricing.

Deep-Dive Brainstorm Packages

  • ~4 hour brainstorming session to envision overall book arc and structure, fine tune outline, and design writing deliverables.
  • Includes preliminary light read (no written comments) of up to 50 pages
  • Discount when added on to Developmental Read options.

 Contact me for pricing.

 

photo credit: Anne Hamersky Photographer

Spark the Second Fire: a one-on-one book lab for the published writer…

This is the all-in-one, comprehensive coaching AND editing package…

  • Initial developmental edit/analysis.
  • 1.5 day private deep-delve consultation/strategy session at my forest studio.
  • Review/feedback on up to 20 pages a month.
  • 12 scheduled 50-minute process/coaching/support/feedback calls.
  • 3 free-floating panic or wild excitement calls.
  • Manuscript read/re-read including a full line edit.
  • Second full-day deep-delve session in my studio.
  • Final manuscript read.
  • Editorial letter with optional referral to publication coach/proposal writing coach.

 Contact me for pricing.

None of these fit exactly?  Let me know what you need and we’ll figure it out.